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Author Topic: Castle Xyntillan  (Read 1767 times)

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Castle Xyntillan
« on: January 22, 2020, 09:13:20 am »
By Gabor Lux
E.M.D.T.
S&W
Levels 1-6

The immense, rambling complex of Castle Xyntillan has stood in its mountain valley for many years. Built over several generations, it has now been deserted by its former owners, and left to time and the elements. However, that is not the end of the story, for Xyntillan's fabulous treasures and Machiavellian deathtraps continue to fascinate the fortune-seekers of a dozen lands – and never mind the ghost stories!

Non. Fucking. Stop. Buy more.

Buy more now. Buy more, and be happy.

In Xanadu did Kubla Khan a stately pleasure dome decree – – Legendary was the Xanadu where Kubla Khan decreed his stately pleasure dome. Today, almost as legendary is Florida's Xyntillan, world's largest private pleasure ground. Here, on the mountain valley, a private mountain was commissioned and successfully built. One hundred thousand trees, twenty thousand tons of marble are the ingredients of Xyntillan's mountain. Contents of Xyntillan's palace: paintings, pictures, statues, the very stones of many another palace. A collection of everything. So big it can never be catalogued or appraised. Enough for ten museums – the loot of the world. Xyntillan's livestock: the fowl of the air, the fish of the sea, the beast of the field and jungle. Two of each, the biggest private zoo since Noah. Like the Pharaohs, Xyntillans's landlords leaves many stones to mark his grave. Since the pyramids, Xyntillan is the costliest monument a man has built to himself…

This 132 page hardback adventure, an homage to Tegal, I don't know know, fuck it, 350 rooms? In a castle, mansion, just like Tegal. Full of family members, paintings on the walls, a map reminiscent of Tegal … it shows what good writing and design actually ARE. Magnificent in its achievements, Charles Dexter Lux has created something very rare and wonderful.

Sometimes publishers will respin a classic. They will rewrite Borderlands, or create new levels or caves or areas for it. They will update a classic adventure for fifth edition, or third, or whatever. I always look forward to these. And they all suck, disappointing me to no end. Inevitably the update is to add A LOT more words to existing entries and pad them out with trivia, what the butler ate for supper two weeks ago and the exhaustive contents of the kitchen cabinets. Maybe three paragraphs of tactics for some encounter.

Xyntillan is not that. Xyntillan is the real deal.

A respin of the Tegal Manor concept, it takes a sprawling manor home filled with the crazy Tegal/Amber family members that occupy it, as well as their paintings. Tegal fell in to the minimal keying side of the genre, just a step beyond "only a monster listing." Xyntillan takes inspiration from Tegal and then expands the text to EXACTLY THE RIGHT AMOUNT. Both have a certain OD&D charm to the encounters, with Tegal being so because of the minimalism and Xyntillan having it because Melan understands adventure design and his soul evidently not (yet?) having been crushed by modern life.

The encounters are reminiscent of Tegal, but not one for one respins. Tegal has a room where a screaming woman runs across a room every four turns. That's the extent of the entry. Xyntillan has a room where a screaming mortally wounded woman in white runs across the room (33% chance), stumbling before she reaches the NW corner. And this is after a two sentence description of the potting room. And before a few sentences describing what happens when you dig in the NW corner. Evocative of, but expanded to the correct degree.

Expanded to the correct degree? Indeed. We're looking for an encounter description that inspires the DM, the implants a seed idea in their head that will grow and allow the DM to fully visualize the room and riff on it as they describe and run it for their players. Writing that inspires the DM to greatness. And, writing that does it in a split second. And I mean a second. The DM glances down at the page, takes a second to read the entry, look up and runs the room. A second. Maybe two. The DM's job is not reading the adventure at the table, it's interacting with the players. The DM glances at and scans a room entry and then runs it. While the players are fumbling about with that to do, etc, the DM is glancing/scanning a bit more, in another couple of seconds. Not minutes. Not 30 seconds. A few, less than five or so. (I should time this one day …) So the job of the text is to give the DM the mental picture that inspires them to run a magnificent encounter and to do it in mere seconds. Evocative and terse, is generally the technique.

And Gabor Lux does it magnificently. The text is the correct length. You get the overview of the room. Then you get indents and bullets to highlight important aspects of the room that the players may follow up on. The rooms have titles to orient the DM. Monster stats are brief and at the end of the room for easy reference during play, almost Ready Ref sheet style. (Although, perhaps not quite as stark as the Ref sheets, thankfully.) It's cross-referenced, so if there's a quest, or an object of a quest, for example, it tells you where to find more information. Bolding is used appropriately to highlight important features and call the DM's attention to them, sometimes with further follow up text again, indented, bulleted.) The text manages around eight or so entries to the page, with wide margins, with the generous formatting contributing immensely to usability by the DM at the table.

Encounters are wonderful. Skeleton guardsmen sing and tall tall tales in their barracks. The kitchen knives fly at the party … once. Statues mock the party, or give them a level boost. An unseen hand stays a killing blow, if the party restores a statue. A body buried under a gazebo on a small hill in the center of a pond. A horseshoe in the stables that, if found, gives you a good luck effect. These are things you fucking expect to happen, which make them wonderful. A horseshoe giving luck? Of course it does! That's what SHOULD happen when you find a horseshoe. Of course the skeleton guardsmen sing and boast. Of course there are phantom steeds in the stables. Duh? WTF? Aren't we playing D&D? Of course the iron stove in the kitchen closes, biting you in half, if you look inside. It makes PERFECT sense. Tropes are good for a reason and when done right they really shine, acting as cultural clues to the metagaming player. Which is exactly what the fuck they should be doing in order to stay alive in this place.

Oh, what else? The wanderers are easy to find, in the back of the book. The little town presented as a home base has EXACTLY enough detail to fulfill its purpose. It's a home base to make forays from. It details a couple of bars, etc to recruit henchmen and stay at to recover. A cleric to heal. Some secret police. Wait, what?! Yes, a couple of subplots in the town. But no more! It concentrates on the details and flavour that are useful IN PLAY. And only the important stuff that inspires, not boring old lists of prices, etc., or Yet Another Description Of a Jovial Barman. The maps are great, Conley does a great job of making something reminiscent of Tegal but much more useful, with little side notes on the maps about webs in the hallways, lighting, sound, refuse on the floors, etc. A perfect tool to assist in both usability and creating an evocative environment. Treasure is magnificent. Ocacular brains in jars, unique magic swords. A whole host of things both mundane and magic to keep the party busy and for them to leverage. Notes on how the family in the castle react to intruders. It's all great. And presented in pretty much the perfect amount of detail. And monsters? How about "The Blind Beast of Xyntillian." That's fucking right! No generic-o "animated statue" crap in this adventure! I got a name baby! New rules./clarifications are present for morale, hiring, fleeing the dungeon … things very pertinent to actual play. It's perfect.

There's an occasional miss. Every once in awhile there's a bit of information that you wish were present. The most notable, for me, is the roof/window/vista-view situation. Only a sucker goes in through the door. A couple of words on the exterior entrance situation, and overview if you would, would have been nice. And, also, a little description of Xyntillian when seen from approach. This is clearly a tie in to the roof/window/door commentary, giving the party notable landmarks to seek out (a dome, etc) and/or holes to poke their heads in to. "Where are the doors?" the party asks. One can intuit a great deal from the maps, especially major border landmarks like doors and side towers, but the dome, interior towers and courtyards are less clear without intense study … the kind I don't like to do during play.

But, magnificent! Ye Olde Kente once said that Thracia was the only adventure you ever needed. He was, I think, correct, at least in general. This however IS the only adventure you ever need. You could run a party through this for YEARS, with more than enough information present to riff on. A perfect OD&D product, with whimsy and wonder without going off in to Funhouse territory. I got this last night, stayed up all night reading and re-reading, write this the next morning, and will be adding it to my "No Prep" Dungeonland game tonight.

This is good.

This is available at his storefront: for $40 for a Print+PDF copy. $40 is a FUCKING STEAL! G1, at 8 pages, would be $20 in todays cash. $40 for this this is a BARGAIN! But it also costs $22 to ship to the US so, even at $62 it's a bargain. (Mother fuck! Seriously? $22 to ship it? I don't doubt this is the actual cost; my own experiences with international shipping have been price gougy also. You can ship a boatload, literally, of stuff from Asia to the US for nothing but the worldwide national post office conspiracy bends you the fuck over and makes you take it!)

There's a sample layout on MEGA, if you want a preview: https://mega.nz/#!dwIkXYiJ!4lZA2ar0h5RhKM7n7Z9U0ACJqPkJStmF0wnCB7U8HYQ

But why not go ahead and just buy it? Because you hate quality? Seriously? You're on the fence about one of the five best adventures ever written? Why, because it's $60, shipped? I've had lunch for one that is more than $60. It's not worth a lunch to you? Really?

https://emdt.bigcartel.com/product/castle-xyntillan

Gabor Lux also has some philosophical statements about adventuring and how they apply to Xyntillan on his blog. They are useful to understand the concepts behind Xyntillan.

https://beyondfomalhaut.blogspot.com/2019/11/news-castle-xyntillan-announcement-and.html
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« Reply #1 on: January 23, 2020, 07:25:50 pm »
Great review! Much fun to read. Gabor Lux is an amazing talent. I've enjoyed his blog tremendously over the years. I'm looking forward to checking out his mega-dungeon!

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« Reply #2 on: February 04, 2020, 01:27:53 pm »
Was gonna buy this then saw the shipping...ouch. Now I know how the Eurotards feel whenever they buy something from the US. Anyway, uniformly excellent reviews, so I guess I'll just bite the $25 shipping charge and get my Hungarian megadungeon fix.

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« Reply #3 on: February 04, 2020, 02:47:41 pm »
Thanks for the vote of confidence! The shipping does suck, but sadly, that's what I am paying at the post for worldwide shipping - and what's worse, this is better than most US-to-Europe shipping gets outside Amazon (who own the best logistics system on the planet).

The small upside is that this is a flat rate - for $7, I can ship you a whole lot of smaller zines, or for $25, I can ship you up to two hardcovers and a selection of zines, or a hardcover and a bunch of zines, and so on. It is not ideal for single items, but tolerable for multiples.
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« Reply #4 on: February 04, 2020, 09:29:41 pm »
Quote from: Brad;1120960
Was gonna buy this then saw the shipping...ouch. Now I know how the Eurotards feel whenever they buy something from the US. Anyway, uniformly excellent reviews, so I guess I'll just bite the $25 shipping charge and get my Hungarian megadungeon fix.

Had you (or I, because I paid the breathtaking shipping too) been a bit quicker, Exalted Funeral had some at one point.

Those guys have shockingly good taste when it comes to stocking stuff.

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« Reply #5 on: March 28, 2020, 07:51:58 am »
Nice review!

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« Reply #6 on: March 29, 2020, 03:57:17 am »
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Thanks for the vote of confidence!

Your work is consistently unique and excellent.

Have you looked into using Amazon's Kindle Direct Publishing (their POD, used to be called CreateSpace) for sales into the USA/UK markets? That would bring your shipping costs to zero and you could encourage your fans and buyers to leave reviews to drive sales.

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« Reply #7 on: April 01, 2020, 06:58:42 am »
Really excellent review, thank you !

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« Reply #8 on: April 04, 2020, 10:44:28 am »
Quote from: Spinachcat;1125175
Your work is consistently unique and excellent.

Have you looked into using Amazon's Kindle Direct Publishing (their POD, used to be called CreateSpace) for sales into the USA/UK markets? That would bring your shipping costs to zero and you could encourage your fans and buyers to leave reviews to drive sales.
Thanks - that's much appreciated!

I have not looked into POD publishing, as I prefer to support my friendly local gamer-run printer with my business (who plays a legionary in one of our campaigns!) Amazon, on the other hand, is a creepy monopoly that kills local businesses like his, so I try to steer clear of it as much as I can. And I don't print in China either. This is not always easy, but every little thing helps. I also enjoy taking printed orders to the post - it makes me happy, and feels like a tangible effect of being a publisher, instead of a complete abstraction like POD sales.

If international shipping becomes entirely unfeasible (which could happen in the following years), I will reconsider, but as long as it is possible, I would like to stick with this model. I am not fanatical about it, but it is how I like things.
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