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Phydea Campaign Setting, Redone

Started by Zalmoxis, May 03, 2006, 11:23:49 AM

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Cyberzombie

Page 3, column 1, paragraph 2, last sentance: break it in half at the "and", so that the second sentance starts. "While adventurers...".

A nitpicky post this is, yes, but it will tighten up your prose.  :)
 

Zalmoxis

Quote from: Cyberzombielast sentance:

:heh:

Seriously though, that is a good idea. Thanks!

EDIT: Just fixed it.

Zalmoxis

I just ran a spellcheck and corrected all of the mistakes where the letters "f" and "i" were left out and replaced by periods. I also corrected all of the other misspellings, so those who are helping me by checking for errors can ignore misspelled words.

Sigmund

Quote from: ZalmoxisI just ran a spellcheck and corrected all of the mistakes where the letters "f" and "i" were left out and replaced by periods. I also corrected all of the other misspellings, so those who are helping me by checking for errors can ignore misspelled words.

Can ya send an updated pdf, that way I wont be distracted by any more occurances of the "f" thing, or what-have-you?
- Chris Sigmund

Old Loser

"I\'d rather be a killer than a victim."

Quote from: John Morrow;418271I role-play for the ride, not the destination.

Zalmoxis

Quote from: SigmundCan ya send an updated pdf, that way I wont be distracted by any more occurances of the "f" thing, or what-have-you?

Yes,  sure can. I am converting it to .pdf right now, and will send it to you as soon as it is finished. Thanks. :)

Zalmoxis

Sigmund and Cyberzombie... you now have the edited version.

Sigmund

Got it, I've been working the last couple days, but I should be able to start reading it again Tuesday.
- Chris Sigmund

Old Loser

"I\'d rather be a killer than a victim."

Quote from: John Morrow;418271I role-play for the ride, not the destination.

Zalmoxis

Quote from: SigmundGot it, I've been working the last couple days, but I should be able to start reading it again Tuesday.

And to that I say, mahna, mahna. :bow:

kanegrundar

Zalmoxis, if you shoot me the edited version, I've got some time this week to proof as well if you want.
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cnath.rm

Quote from: kanegrundarZalmoxis, if you shoot me the edited version, I've got some time this week to proof as well if you want.
Same here, all the talk about it has my interest to say the least. :)
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Zalmoxis

Quote from: kanegrundarZalmoxis, if you shoot me the edited version, I've got some time this week to proof as well if you want.

Great! :)

I'll send it to you now.

Zalmoxis

Quote from: cnath.rmSame here, all the talk about it has my interest to say the least. :)

Shoot your email to me at moogspaceport@gmail.com and I'll send it to you.

Cyberzombie

Page 83 -- Flesh Shaping -- the time says "See Table"; there isn't a table there.

Very interesting so far, though I'm reading it all out of order.  I blame it on the 1e DMG.  It got me out of the habit of thinking of rules books as linear constructs.  :)
 

Zalmoxis

Quote from: CyberzombiePage 83 -- Flesh Shaping -- the time says "See Table"; there isn't a table there.

Very interesting so far, though I'm reading it all out of order.  I blame it on the 1e DMG.  It got me out of the habit of thinking of rules books as linear constructs.  :)

Yup, that's a definite error. And yeah, that DMG was a doosie.:)

kanegrundar

Still reading, but I haven't come across anything major.  I'll have more time come Thursday to read it more in depth.
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