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Author Topic: Phydea Campaign Setting, Redone  (Read 5121 times)

Cyberzombie

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« Reply #45 on: May 06, 2006, 03:22:13 PM »
Page 3, column 1, paragraph 2, last sentance: break it in half at the "and", so that the second sentance starts. "While adventurers...".

A nitpicky post this is, yes, but it will tighten up your prose.  :)
 

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« Reply #46 on: May 06, 2006, 05:17:17 PM »
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last sentance:


:heh:

Seriously though, that is a good idea. Thanks!

EDIT: Just fixed it.

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« Reply #47 on: May 06, 2006, 08:09:52 PM »
I just ran a spellcheck and corrected all of the mistakes where the letters "f" and "i" were left out and replaced by periods. I also corrected all of the other misspellings, so those who are helping me by checking for errors can ignore misspelled words.

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« Reply #48 on: May 06, 2006, 10:25:36 PM »
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I just ran a spellcheck and corrected all of the mistakes where the letters "f" and "i" were left out and replaced by periods. I also corrected all of the other misspellings, so those who are helping me by checking for errors can ignore misspelled words.


Can ya send an updated pdf, that way I wont be distracted by any more occurances of the "f" thing, or what-have-you?
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« Reply #49 on: May 07, 2006, 12:45:40 AM »
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Can ya send an updated pdf, that way I wont be distracted by any more occurances of the "f" thing, or what-have-you?


Yes,  sure can. I am converting it to .pdf right now, and will send it to you as soon as it is finished. Thanks. :)

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« Reply #50 on: May 07, 2006, 01:59:06 AM »
Sigmund and Cyberzombie... you now have the edited version.

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« Reply #51 on: May 07, 2006, 09:45:21 PM »
Got it, I've been working the last couple days, but I should be able to start reading it again Tuesday.
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« Reply #52 on: May 07, 2006, 10:18:03 PM »
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Got it, I've been working the last couple days, but I should be able to start reading it again Tuesday.


And to that I say, mahna, mahna. :bow:

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« Reply #53 on: May 08, 2006, 12:22:04 AM »
Zalmoxis, if you shoot me the edited version, I've got some time this week to proof as well if you want.
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« Reply #54 on: May 08, 2006, 12:37:40 AM »
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Zalmoxis, if you shoot me the edited version, I've got some time this week to proof as well if you want.

Same here, all the talk about it has my interest to say the least. :)
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« Reply #55 on: May 08, 2006, 12:54:45 AM »
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Zalmoxis, if you shoot me the edited version, I've got some time this week to proof as well if you want.


Great! :)

I'll send it to you now.

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« Reply #56 on: May 08, 2006, 12:55:25 AM »
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Same here, all the talk about it has my interest to say the least. :)


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« Reply #57 on: May 09, 2006, 03:28:02 PM »
Page 83 -- Flesh Shaping -- the time says "See Table"; there isn't a table there.

Very interesting so far, though I'm reading it all out of order.  I blame it on the 1e DMG.  It got me out of the habit of thinking of rules books as linear constructs.  :)
 

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« Reply #58 on: May 09, 2006, 09:55:30 PM »
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Page 83 -- Flesh Shaping -- the time says "See Table"; there isn't a table there.

Very interesting so far, though I'm reading it all out of order.  I blame it on the 1e DMG.  It got me out of the habit of thinking of rules books as linear constructs.  :)


Yup, that's a definite error. And yeah, that DMG was a doosie.:)

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« Reply #59 on: May 09, 2006, 11:14:54 PM »
Still reading, but I haven't come across anything major.  I'll have more time come Thursday to read it more in depth.
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