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CF: Fantasy re-creation

Started by Narf the Mouse, March 12, 2009, 02:40:01 PM

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Narf the Mouse

Having lost my previous efforts to a HD crash, I am now re-writing.

Therefore, I wish feedback on the following two character format options - Usability, readability, likeability... :

Character Sheet #1
Bran o'Glendale
Character Points: 12/12

Traits
Bran
    Body
        Combat +1 (1)
              Melee +2/+3 (1)
                   Arming Swords +3/+6 (1)
              Ranged
                    Crossbows +3/+4 (1)
    Mind
        Perception
                  Danger +4 (3)
        Games
             Wargames +2 (1)
                     Chess +3/+5 (1)
    Spirit
          Courage +1 (1)
                 Battle +2/+3 (1)
          Magic
               Healing +2 (1)
    Luck
        Battle -1 (1)
        Reputation -1 (1)

Items
GP: 16/16
Arming Sword: Edged +1 (1), Durable +1 (1), Parrying +1 (1). 3 gp
Crossbow: Winch +2 (3), Long Range +1 (1). 4 gp
Crossbow Bolts, x50: Single-Use. Sharp +1, Accurate +1. 2 gp
Horse +1 (3): Battle-Trained +2 (3), Endurance +1 (1)
Debt: Cost: -4 gp


Character Sheet #2
Bran o'Glendale
Character Points: 12/12

Attributes
Body
Mind
Spirit
Luck

Skills
Combat +1 (1)
      M+: Melee +1 (1)
      M-: Longsword +3 (1)
      M-: Crossbow +3 (1)
Perception +1 (1)
          M: Physical Danger +2 (1)
Wargames +1 (1)
        M-: Chess +3 (1)
Healing Magic +1 (1)
             M: Physical +2 (1)
Courage +1 (1)
       M: Battle +2 (1)
Luck
    M: Battle -1 (1)
    M: Battle Reputation -1 (1)

Items
GP: 16/16
Arming Sword: Edged +1 (1), Durable +1 (1), Parrying +1 (1). 3 gp
Crossbow: Winch +2 (3), Long Range +1 (1). 4 gp
Crossbow Bolts, x50: Single-Use. Sharp +1, Accurate +1. 2 gp
Horse +1 (3): Battle-Trained +2 (3), Endurance +1 (1)
Debt: Cost: -4 gp
The main problem with government is the difficulty of pressing charges against its directors.

Given a choice of two out of three M&Ms, the human brain subconsciously tries to justify the two M&Ms chosen as being superior to the M&M not chosen.

Silverlion

Now what do the numbers mean?
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Narf the Mouse

The ones outside the brackets are dice bonuses. The ones to the right of a '/' are the dice bonuses for that branch, added together. The ones inside brackets are character point costs.
The main problem with government is the difficulty of pressing charges against its directors.

Given a choice of two out of three M&Ms, the human brain subconsciously tries to justify the two M&Ms chosen as being superior to the M&M not chosen.

Drohem

Character sheet #2 would be my preference.  It's appearance is neater and cleaner to me.  Character sheet #1 seems disjointed to me and unorganized.

Silverlion

I like sheet two as well, it still needs more information from a glance so I can separate what the numbers mean.
High Valor REVISED: A fantasy Dark Age RPG. Available NOW!
Hearts & Souls 2E Coming in 2019