will have a look

ok first thing you forgot to update the table of contents.

as for the class.

mana borrowing seems like a cool fun abilitie of course i dont yet know exactly how mana works yet but from my assumptions i have been able to make it seems it should work fine

the chronomancers passives have the right names but the text is the assign passive text.

when looking at the first few spells i expected a bit more of the mentioned side effects but seeing them in the later spells the lack of noticeable side effects are fine on the spells that lack them although i was somewhat excepting slow to speed somebody else up but obvisuly turning it to your advantage is a lot harder then just minimizing it (maybe add an option to spend extra mana to speed somebody else up at the same time but that might be a bit unbalanced) but other then that the spells work fine without side effects and even the slow is alright when you consider the slow boom,

extend ability does not actually say what it does.
i like fast forward a great example of how the school of magic works.
it took me a while to work out what statis does but your editors can help with that.
loop is going to be great fun.

in general the chronomancer gets a few more abilities then the previous classes but thats to be expected its the first actual magic class the assassin just makes use of a few bits of magic the chronomancers magic is far more varied. some of the abilities are marked as rage abilities some berserker abilities and some both. in general though a great flavorful set of spells

one thing i noticed is that the class gains no bonus mana i am guessing you want to reserve that for a more general caster class but that makes me wonder why you cant just have the mana bonus on the chronomancer smaller then it would be on a more pure mage but im guessing the bonus on the pure mages will be to small for a decrease to really work

oh clerics up next i cant wait

Looking at it, i think i'm going to give chronomancer a small Mp boost per level. the last 5 or so powers i wrote pretty late at night, and was probably a little more loopy than usual. so even the small amount of editing i would normally do to it didn't happen. but when cleric goes up, some of the things might change in the chronomancer. as usual, thank you for the feedback!

glad to help

I'm not dead! well, not physically at least. found out the whole book I've been working on was the wrong size! I have been working on A4 paper, and all the sites print on 8 1/2 by 11. so I started a new document, and had to transfer everything over, and re-size, and even tweak the layout a bit. but I did take this opportunity to completely redesign the book! in addition to that, their is a whole new section on Gaia's history near the beginning, with art by my amazing and exploitable roommate! but I'm curious about anyone having an opinion on the new design. also cleric has been finished as well. I will be using dropbox to post links directly to the site as well, as that I believe will be easier on everyone.

heres the link
https://www.dropbox.com/s/ngbwgoiksanbhd0/LegendsofGaia_fpages.pdf?dl=0

horray hes not dead

also dang that is a major setback i will get my feedback up soon

sorry for the delay in feedback it should be done sometime today

No problem! At your leisure

alright, so i decided to make a folder in drop box to put some documents in so as I update the folder, you can see as it goes. along with the ruleset, is also a list of passives and disadvantages (any Idea's anyone can come up with that seems like it would fit or be cool to have as either a passive or disadvantage, let me know), a short list of basic abilities based on the secondary stats (very incomplete), as well as the spell repertoire for all 7 elements, including a basic spell list. last but not least, is a shop. that is the complete shop for the game, and if anything seems blatantly missing, i would love to know, as the shop comes after classes in the book. you can ignore the classes documents in the link, as that is quite old.

heres the dropbox link to the folder
https://www.dropbox.com/sh/kto6pfnlrupeqwm/AAA2KyPg-Y_tKbMx9M6cymMOa?dl=0

as always, any feedback appreciated

oh fuck i completly forgot im busy early tomorow but tomorow afternoon im free

i have been distracted lately but in the interest of getting some feedback going

you may want to move skull chapter break at the end of the preface it would work elsewhere but puting it right at the start gives the impresion the game is gritter then it is

It had been done. reworked the pages a bit, and added little blue boxes where art is gonna go. slightly redesigned

Dark Paladins are done and in! next up are the Engineers.
here is the link! the document is the pdf called legendsofgaia_fpages

https://www.dropbox.com/sh/kto6pfnlrupeqwm/AAA2KyPg-Y_tKbMx9M6cymMOa?dl=0

Also in this folder link are the new and relatively finalised chars yet sheets, I would love feedback on there too. I mostly focused on using commonly refered to stats and numbers on the front, with less important or commonly used stuff on the back, or stuff that doesn't need to be referenced in combat. I also got rid of the black bars from the last edition.

Engineers are done! the same dropbox link should work. https://www.dropbox.com/sh/kto6pfnlrupeqwm/AAA2KyPg-Y_tKbMx9M6cymMOa?dl=0.

feedback is welcome by all!